Saturday, 30 March 2013

Feedback from draft two of music video


It is essential to receive feedback from others about your music video so you can gather whether the audience are able to understand your narrative for your music video and also whether you scenes relate to your theme.

When I first showed my music video to my class I was told to add in more clips to show who the actual bully was and also if I can, add another scene of the sign language as this drew them in to the music video.

Please find the link below for my draft 2 music video, and see whether you agree with their comments-

  


Please now check out there feed back form the link below :) 




I have found the feedback very useful because it has no pointed out more changes I need to back to better my music video, I have taken all these points on board and am in the process of changing my music video. Although all the feedback has helped me I still really like how the sign language scene isn’t in time with the music, it adds to the effect that lack of communication/ communication has gone wrong happens and how the audience deal with that.

  

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