Here are a few different shots from my planning process for my digipack.
At first I found it hard to think of ideas as I was unsure of what I wanted my digipack to get across to my audience, after researching I have chosen to use images from my music video to reflect the story of my main song
Feedback from first viewing (you may want to add this to a different post)
ReplyDeleteOverall - a range of different locations, actors and scenes with the potential to convey a theme clearly and convincingly. Evidence of adventurous production and varied editing techniques to achieve a range of effects.
Q - was this the most powerful opening you could have chosen for your video to really grab the viewer?
Try hooking the viewer with fast edits or a more dramatic start or symbolic image.
Q - is the theme (communication) coming across as clearly as it could from the start and being reinforced throughout? How could you achieve this? Try overlaying text? Establish the narrative early regarding communication problems.
Q - do you have any close ups of the braille?
Could try using the sign language section for every chorus, like a refrain?
Some sections could be shorter / edited more quickly
Try linking the ideas together by using a short montage of all the sections as your opening sequence?